docs: show new ui as screenshots in the readme

chore: 1.3.2
fix: hide the progress bar when start notices are off
2026-09-28 15:08:14 +02:00 · 2026-09-28 14:40:06 +02:00 · 2026-09-28 14:40:00 +02:00 · 2026-09-26 21:19:28 +02:00 · 2026-09-25 09:30:38 +02:00 · 2026-09-24 13:21:19 +02:00
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 ko_fi: felitendo
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 name: 💡 Feature request
 description: An idea to make cachy-auto-update better.
 labels:
 - enhancement
 body:
 - type: checkboxes
  id: checks
  attributes:
    label: Before you start
    options:
    - label: I searched the issues and this is not requested yet.
      required: true
 - type: textarea
  id: problem
  attributes:
    label: What problem would this solve?
    description: What are you trying to do, and what gets in the way?
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: textarea
  id: idea
  attributes:
    label: What would you like?
    description: How it could work. A rough idea is fine.
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: textarea
  id: alternatives
  attributes:
    label: Other ways you thought of
 - type: textarea
  id: more
  attributes:
    label: Anything else?
    description: Mockups, screenshots, or other tools that do it well.
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 name: 🐛 Bug report
 description: Something does not work as it should.
 labels:
 - bug
 body:
 - type: markdown
  attributes:
    value: Thanks for taking the time! The more you fill in, the faster it can be fixed.
 - type: checkboxes
  id: checks
  attributes:
    label: Before you start
    options:
    - label: I searched the issues and this is not reported yet.
      required: true
    - label: I use the latest version.
      required: true
 - type: textarea
  id: what
  attributes:
    label: What happened?
    description: What did you do, and what went wrong?
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: textarea
  id: steps
  attributes:
    label: Steps to reproduce
    placeholder: |
      1.
      2.
      3.
 - type: textarea
  id: expected
  attributes:
    label: What did you expect?
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: dropdown
  id: part
  attributes:
    label: What is affected?
    multiple: true
    options:
    - Packages (pacman)
    - AUR
    - Flatpak
    - AppImages
    - When it runs or waits
    - Notifications
    - The menu
    - Other
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: input
  id: version
  attributes:
    label: Version
    description: The output of `cachy-auto-update --version`.
    placeholder: cachy-auto-update 1.3.1
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: dropdown
  id: install
  attributes:
    label: How did you install it?
    options:
    - AUR
    - Built from source
    - Other
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: input
  id: system
  attributes:
    label: System
    description: Distribution, desktop, and paru or yay.
    placeholder: CachyOS, KDE Plasma 6.4, paru
  validations:
    required: true
 - type: textarea
  id: logs
  attributes:
    label: Status and logs
    description: The output of `cachy-auto-update status` and `cachy-auto-update log`. If it did not run at all, also `journalctl -u cachy-auto-update`.
    render: shell
 - type: textarea
  id: more
  attributes:
    label: Anything else?
    description: Screenshots, videos or anything else that could help.
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 blank_issues_enabled: false
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 #!/usr/bin/env bash
 #
 # Builds the GitHub release notes for a tag, the way big projects such as
 # Immich lay them out: the hand-written entry from CHANGELOG.md (a welcome,
 # the highlights), a support section, then every commit since the last
 # release, sorted by kind, and a link to the full changelog.
 #
 #   .github/release-notes.sh v1.2.0           the notes
 #   .github/release-notes.sh --title v1.2.0   the title (checks the entry exists)
 #
 # Commit authors come from the GitHub API through gh. Without it the list
 # goes without them.
 set -euo pipefail
 cd -- "$(dirname -- "${BASH_SOURCE[0]}")/.."
 title=0
 if [[ ${1:-} == --title ]]; then
 	title=1
 	shift
 fi
 tag="${1:?usage: release-notes.sh [--title] vX.Y.Z}"
 if ! grep -qx "## $tag" CHANGELOG.md; then
 	echo "CHANGELOG.md has no entry for $tag. Add \"## $tag\" first." >&2
 	exit 1
 fi
 if (( title )); then
 	printf '%s\n' "$tag"
 	exit 0
 fi
 repo="${GITHUB_REPOSITORY:-$(git remote get-url origin | sed -E 's#^.*github\.com[:/]##; s#\.git$##')}"
 name="${repo#*/}"
 # The entry: up to the next one, without the date line (GitHub shows the
 # date), one heading level up, outside code blocks.
 entry="$(awk -v h="## $tag" '
 	$0 == h { on = 1; next }
 	on && /^## / { exit }
 	!on { next }
 	/^```/ { code = !code }
 	!code && /^_[0-9]{4}-[0-9]{2}-[0-9]{2}_$/ { next }
 	!code && /^###/ { sub(/^#/, "") }
 	{ print }
 ' CHANGELOG.md | sed -e '/./,$!d')"
 # The commits: from the last release, or from the start. A tag that does not
 # exist yet is a preview of what HEAD would become.
 if git rev-parse -q --verify "refs/tags/$tag" > /dev/null; then
 	target="$tag"
 	prev="$(git describe --tags --abbrev=0 --match 'v[0-9]*' "$tag^" 2>/dev/null || true)"
 else
 	target="$(git rev-parse HEAD)"
 	prev="$(git describe --tags --abbrev=0 --match 'v[0-9]*' HEAD 2>/dev/null || true)"
 fi
 declare -A login=()
 if command -v gh > /dev/null; then
 	if [[ -n $prev ]]; then
 		api=(api "repos/$repo/compare/$prev...$target" --jq '.commits[] | [.sha, (.author.login // "")] | @tsv')
 	else
 		api=(api --paginate "repos/$repo/commits?sha=$target&per_page=100" --jq '.[] | [.sha, (.author.login // "")] | @tsv')
 	fi
 	while IFS=$'\t' read -r sha who; do
 		[[ -n $who ]] && login[$sha]="$who"
 	done < <(gh "${api[@]}" 2>/dev/null || true)
 fi
 declare -A list=()
 count_maint=0
 while IFS=$'\t' read -r sha subject body; do
 	# Version bumps say nothing a reader needs.
 	[[ $subject =~ ^(chore:\ )?($name\ )?v?[0-9]+\.[0-9]+\.[0-9]+$ ]] && continue
 	case "$subject" in
 		*!:*) kind=breaking ;;
 		feat:* | feat\(*) kind=feat ;;
 		fix:* | fix\(*) kind=fix ;;
 		perf:* | perf\(*) kind=enh ;;
 		docs:* | docs\(*) kind=docs ;;
 		chore* | ci:* | ci\(* | build* | refactor* | test* | style*) kind=maint ;;
 		# Older commits without a prefix, sorted by what they say.
 		*README* | *readme* | *Readme*) kind=docs ;;
 		Add\ * | Put\ * | Introduce\ *) kind=feat ;;
 		Fix\ * | Repair\ * | Recover\ * | Stop\ *) kind=fix ;;
 		*\ *) kind=enh ;;
 		*) kind=maint ;;
 	esac
 	[[ $body == *"BREAKING CHANGE"* ]] && kind=breaking
 	[[ $subject == "Initial commit" ]] && kind=maint
 	line="* $subject"
 	[[ -n ${login[$sha]:-} ]] && line+=" by @${login[$sha]}"
 	line+=" in https://github.com/$repo/commit/$sha"
 	list[$kind]+="$line"$'\n'
 	[[ $kind == maint ]] && count_maint=$((count_maint + 1))
 done < <(git log --reverse --no-merges --format='%H%x09%s%x09%b%x1e' "${prev:+$prev..}$target" | tr '\n\036' ' \n' | sed 's/^ //')
 changes=''
 for pair in "breaking:🚨 Breaking Changes" "feat:🚀 Features" "enh:🌟 Enhancements" "fix:🐛 Bug fixes" "docs:📚 Documentation"; do
 	kind="${pair%%:*}"
 	[[ -n ${list[$kind]:-} ]] || continue
 	changes+="### ${pair#*:}"$'\n'"${list[$kind]}"
 done
 if [[ -n ${list[maint]:-} ]]; then
 	changes+=$'\n'"<details><summary>🧰 Maintenance ($count_maint)</summary>"$'\n\n'"${list[maint]}"$'\n'"</details>"$'\n'
 fi
 if [[ -n $prev ]]; then
 	full="**Full Changelog**: https://github.com/$repo/compare/$prev...$tag"
 else
 	full="**Full Changelog**: https://github.com/$repo/commits/$tag"
 fi
 # A release with highlights is a big one: it gets a heading and the support
 # section, as in Immich. A patch is a sentence or two and the list.
 if grep -q '^## Highlights$' <<< "$entry"; then
 	cat <<EOF
 # 🚀 $name $tag
 $entry
 ## ☕ Support $name
 If $name is useful to you, you can buy me a coffee. It keeps these tools going. Found a bug or have an idea? Tell me in the [issues](https://github.com/$repo/issues).
 <a href="https://ko-fi.com/felitendo"><img src="https://storage.ko-fi.com/cdn/kofi5.png?v=6" alt="Buy me a coffee on Ko-fi" height="48"></a>
 ----
 EOF
 else
 	printf '%s\n\n' "$entry"
 fi
 printf "## What's Changed\n%s\n\n%s\n" "$changes" "$full"
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 # Changelog
 What each release brings, newest first. The [GitHub releases](https://github.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update/releases) add every commit that went into it.
 ## v1.3.2
 _2026-09-28_
 A small patch. With **Notify when an update starts** turned off, the progress bar no longer pops up when an update starts either.
 ## v1.3.1
 _2026-09-24_
 A small patch. The menu now says "1 minute ago" instead of "1 minutes ago".
 ## v1.3.0
 _2026-08-20_
 Welcome to cachy-auto-update `v1.3.0`! This release is all about the progress bar. It now moves through the whole run, and you can finally see what an update is doing while it works.
 ### Highlights
 - A progress bar that never stands still
 - Live log under Details
 - Steps with nothing to do are skipped
 ## v1.2.2
 _2026-08-14_
 A small patch for the progress bar. It now counts downloads too, and every step says clearly that an update is running, for example **Updates werden heruntergeladen** instead of just "Paketquellen".
 ## v1.2.1
 _2026-08-14_
 A quick fix for the new progress bar, which stayed at "0 of 218 items" for the whole run in `v1.2.0`. It now counts every package.
 `cachy-auto-update enable` can also switch off CachyOS's **Reboot recommended!** popup, which shows up in the middle of an update. It only asks. To undo it, delete the link in `/etc/pacman.d/hooks`.
 ## v1.2.0
 _2026-08-14_
 Welcome to cachy-auto-update `v1.2.0`! Updates now show up on your desktop with a real progress bar, and the notifications around them finally behave.
 ### 🚨 Breaking changes
 - The `NotifyReboot` setting is gone. Its "restart recommended" notice came while the update was still running, which invited a restart halfway through. `cachy-auto-update status` still tells you when a restart is due.
 ### Highlights
 - A progress bar on the desktop (needs `python-gobject`)
 - Notifications that stay only when they should
 ## v1.1.2
 _2026-08-08_
 Better defaults. The minimum battery level is now 30 % instead of 40 %, and the prompt to silence cachy-update's own "N updates available" notification now defaults to yes. German users can answer it with `j` now, too.
 ## v1.1.1
 _2026-08-08_
 The settings screen now reacts instantly. Moving the cursor went from 435 ms to 7.5 ms per key press.
 ## v1.1.0
 _2026-08-08_
 Welcome to cachy-auto-update `v1.1.0`! Every option can now be changed from the menu, so nothing needs a text editor any more.
 ### Highlights
 - A settings screen
 ## v1.0.9
 _2026-08-08_
 cachy-auto-update now says so before an update starts, and asks you to leave the computer on (`NotifyOnStart`, on by default). The result then replaces that message instead of showing up next to it.
 ## v1.0.8
 _2026-08-08_
 An important fix for machines nobody watches. A power cut during an update left pacman's lock file behind, and every later run gave up because of it. A lock from before the last boot is now removed and the update runs again. A lock from the current boot is left alone.
 ## v1.0.7
 _2026-08-08_
 The package cache is now trimmed by default. It keeps the last three versions of each package (`KeepOldPackages=3`, like Arch), so it no longer grows to 23 GB. Unused Flatpak runtimes moved to `RemoveOrphans`, which stays off, and the log shows how much space a trim freed.
 ## v1.0.6
 _2026-08-08_
 A run started by hand now shows what pacman, the AUR helper and Flatpak are doing, while timer runs stay quiet. A run that gets stopped now shows as "interrupted" in the menu.
 ## v1.0.5
 _2026-08-08_
 One package that cannot be updated no longer holds back all the others. It is held back for this run, and everything else updates. On one machine, 213 updates were stuck behind a single package. Held-back packages are shown in the menu and in `cachy-auto-update status`.
 ## v1.0.4
 _2026-08-08_
 Switching automatic updates or notifications on or off no longer asks you to press a key. The menu just redraws with the new state.
 ## v1.0.3
 _2026-08-08_
 The menu now acts on a single key press, no Enter needed. Enter and the arrow keys can no longer close it by accident.
 ## v1.0.2
 _2026-08-08_
 `cachy-auto-update --version` now shows the right version. `v1.0.1` still called itself 1.0.0.
 ## v1.0.1
 _2026-08-08_
 The first fixes. pacman's errors were misread on systems that are not in English, "Update now" closed the menu instead of going back to it, and the log was unclear when `checkupdates` is missing.
 ## v1.0.0
 _2026-08-08_
 Welcome to the very first release of cachy-auto-update! It keeps CachyOS up to date on its own: pacman, AUR, Flatpak and AppImages, installed in the background with no password prompt and nothing for you to do.
 <p align="center">
  <img width="620" alt="The cachy-auto-update menu in Konsole" src="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update/a56e804c41923d7531d578728f43d152ec275caa/res/screenshots/menu.png">
 </p>
 ### Highlights
 - Updates at the right moment
 - Speaks up only when it needs you
 - No stored password
@@ -0,0 +1,79 @@
 # CLAUDE.md
 ## Style
 - Keep everything short: replies, explanations, comments, docs.
 - Use simple English: short sentences, common words.
 - Avoid em dashes (—). Do not just swap them for "-" either. Rewrite the sentence instead, for
  example with a comma, a colon, brackets or two sentences.
 ## Commits
 - English only.
 - Conventional Commits prefix: `feat:`, `fix:`, `chore:`, `docs:`, `refactor:`, `ci:`, `build:`.
 - Subject as short as possible. Imperative, lowercase, no trailing period.
 - Body only when something genuinely cannot be inferred from the diff.
 - Never add `Co-Authored-By`, "Generated with" or any other AI attribution to commits or PR descriptions.
 - Do not commit or push before I have checked the changes locally and said they are fine. Then
  commit and push. Several attempts at the same thing make one commit, and attempts that did not
  work make none. Different things done in one session get a commit each. This also goes for
  releases and tags.
 ## Releases
 Releases look like the ones of big projects such as Immich. `.github/release-notes.sh <tag>` builds
 the notes: the entry from `CHANGELOG.md` (welcome and highlights), a support section, every commit
 since the last release sorted by its prefix (`feat`, `fix`, `docs`, ...) with author and link, and
 the full changelog link. So commit subjects end up in public: keep them clear.
 1. Read `git log <last tag>..HEAD` and pick the version: only fixes → patch, something new → minor,
   something that breaks or needs the user to act → major.
 2. Bump the version and add the entry at the top of `CHANGELOG.md`, in one commit (`chore: 1.4.0`).
 3. Push, tag and create the release:
   ```bash
   git tag v1.4.0 && git push origin main v1.4.0
   gh release create v1.4.0 --title v1.4.0 --notes "$(.github/release-notes.sh v1.4.0)"
   ```
 4. PKGBUILDS picks up the new release for the AUR on its own.
 A minor or major release (has `### Highlights`, gets a heading and the support section):
 ```markdown
 ## v1.4.0
 _2026-09-24_
 Welcome to cachy-auto-update `v1.4.0`! One or two sentences on what this release is about.
 <p align="center">
  <img width="480" alt="What the picture shows" src="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update/v1.4.0/<path>">
 </p>
 ### 🚨 Breaking changes
 - Only if there are any: what changed, and what the user has to do.
 ### Highlights
 - First highlight, a few words
 - Second highlight
 ```
 A picture under the welcome is optional. To show the menu or another screen of the program, use a
 real screenshot of it running in Konsole, in English. Never a text copy of the screen. The same goes
 for the README. The highlights stay a plain list: no heading or text per highlight, the list of
 commits explains the rest.
 A patch release is just a sentence or two, for example: "A small patch. The menu no longer closes
 when you press Enter." The list of commits follows on its own.
 - Write for users: what they notice, not how the code does it. Friendly and simple.
 - Commands and settings they type go in backticks, buttons and labels in bold.
 - To change an old release: edit its entry, commit, then
  `gh release edit <tag> --title <tag> --notes "$(.github/release-notes.sh <tag>)"`.
 ## README
 - New UI (a window, a screen, a menu, a setting, a notification) gets a screenshot in the README,
  next to the text about it. Like for releases: a real screenshot of it running, in English.
 - When a screen changes, take its screenshot again. The README never shows an old one.
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# cachy-auto-update - build and install
+# cachy-auto-update: build and install
 #
 # Everything here is plain shell; "building" only means compiling the gettext
 # catalogs and rendering the man page. Both are optional in the sense that the
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 # Overridable so a packager can pass the version it is actually building
 # (`make VERSION=$pkgver`). The literal below is the fallback for builds
 # straight from a checkout, and is what a release tag has to carry.
-VERSION      ?= 1.3.0
+VERSION      ?= 1.3.2
 PREFIX       ?= /usr
 DESTDIR      ?=
@@ -43,14 +43,14 @@ po/%.mo: po/%.po
 ifdef MSGFMT
 	$(MSGFMT) --check --output-file=$@ $<
 else
-	@echo "msgfmt not found - skipping $@"
+	@echo "msgfmt not found, skipping $@"
 endif
 $(MANPAGE): doc/cachy-auto-update.1.scd
 ifdef SCDOC
 	$(SCDOC) < $< > $@
 else
-	@echo "scdoc not found - skipping $@"
+	@echo "scdoc not found, skipping $@"
 endif
 # Syntax-check every shell file, and run shellcheck when it is available.
@@ -62,14 +62,14 @@ check:
 		shellcheck -x -e SC1090,SC1091 src/cachy-auto-update src/cachy-auto-update-run $(LIBS); \
 		echo "ok  shellcheck"; \
 	else \
-		echo "shellcheck not found - skipped"; \
+		echo "shellcheck not found, skipped"; \
 	fi
 	@if command -v python3 >/dev/null 2>&1; then \
 		python3 -m py_compile src/cachy-auto-update-progress \
 			&& echo "ok  src/cachy-auto-update-progress"; \
 		rm -rf src/__pycache__; \
 	else \
-		echo "python3 not found - skipped"; \
+		echo "python3 not found, skipped"; \
 	fi
 	@if command -v visudo >/dev/null 2>&1; then \
 		visudo -cf res/sudoers/cachy-auto-update >/dev/null && echo "ok  sudoers"; \
@@ -1,45 +1,24 @@
-# cachy-auto-update
+<p align="center">
  <img width="200" src="res/cachy-auto-update.svg" alt="cachy-auto-update">
 </p>
-Unattended background updates for CachyOS — no password prompt, no terminal,
+<h1 align="center">cachy-auto-update</h1>
 nothing to remember.
-Built for the machine you set up for somebody else and would rather not have to
+<h3 align="center">Unattended background updates for CachyOS.</h3>
 maintain: it updates pacman packages, AUR packages, Flatpaks and AppImages by
 itself, stays out of the way while they are gaming or on battery, never touches
 the package database while they are using `pacman` by hand, and only speaks up
 when something actually needs a human.
-```bash
+<p align="center">
-sudo cachy-auto-update
+  pacman, AUR, Flatpak and AppImages. In the background, with no password prompt.
-```
+</p>
-That opens a menu with the two switches there are:
+<h5 align="center">
  <a href="#install">Install</a> |
  <a href="#how-to-use">How to use</a> |
  <a href="https://github.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update/issues">Report a bug</a>
 </h5>
-```
+<p align="center">
-  CachyOS Auto-Update
+  <a href="https://ko-fi.com/felitendo"><img src="https://storage.ko-fi.com/cdn/kofi5.png?v=6" alt="Buy me a coffee on Ko-fi" height="48"></a>
-
+</p>
  Automatic updates            ON
  Notifications                ON
  Last check                   3 hours ago
  Last successful update       Sat 08 Aug 2026 04:12:03 CEST (23 packages)
  Next scheduled run           Sat 08 Aug 2026 05:00:00 CEST
  [1] Toggle automatic updates
  [2] Toggle notifications
  [3] Update now
  [4] Show log
  [5] Show current conditions
  [6] Settings
  [q] Quit
 ```
 Everything is configurable from **[6] Settings** — a cursor list covering all
 eighteen options, so nothing needs a text editor. Arrow keys select, Space or
 Right changes a value, `q` goes back; changes are written immediately.
 The interface is fully translated; on a German system everything above appears
 in German.
 ## Install
@@ -48,260 +27,75 @@ paru -S cachy-auto-update
 sudo cachy-auto-update enable
 ```
-Updates are **off** until you enable them — a freshly installed package has no
+## How to use
 business rebuilding somebody's system before being asked.
-## What it updates
+```bash
 sudo cachy-auto-update
 ```
 <p align="center">
  <img src="res/screenshots/menu.png" alt="The cachy-auto-update menu in Konsole: automatic updates and notifications on" width="620">
 </p>
 Press **1** to turn automatic updates on or off. **6** has all the settings.
 ## When does it update?
 | | |
 |---|---|
-| Repository packages | `pacman -Syu`, after `checkupdates` confirms there is work |
+| Battery below 30 % | ⏸️ Waits (on power it runs) |
-| AUR | `paru` or `yay`, whichever is installed |
+| A game is running | ⏸️ Waits |
-| Flatpak | system and per-user installations |
+| pacman, yay or paru is running | ⏸️ Waits |
-| AppImages | via [Gear Lever](https://github.com/mijorus/gearlever), if installed |
+| Shutdown or suspend during an update | 🚫 Blocked until it is done |
 | Restart after an update | ❌ Never on its own, you get a notification |
-It also trims the pacman package cache after each run (`paccache`, keeping the
+## More
 3 most recent versions), because otherwise `/var/cache/pacman/pkg` grows
 forever — tens of gigabytes on a machine with a few large packages. Set
 `KeepOldPackages=1` if disk space matters more than the ability to downgrade.
-`-git`/`-devel` AUR packages and orphan removal exist as options but are off by
+<details>
-default. Orphan removal deletes installed software, and "orphaned" only means
+<summary>What it updates</summary>
 nothing else depends on it — which is also true of something installed
 deliberately.
-## When it holds back
+| | |
 |---|---|
 | Packages | `pacman -Syu` |
 | AUR | `paru` or `yay` |
 | Flatpak | system and user installs |
 | AppImages | through [Gear Lever](https://github.com/mijorus/gearlever) |
-A run is postponed — and retried an hour later — when:
+</details>
- the battery is below 30 % (ignored on mains power; desktops without a battery
+<details>
-  are never affected),
+<summary>Safety</summary>
 - a game is running: GameMode, a known game process, or anything holding a
  blocking idle inhibitor,
 - pacman's database is locked, or `pacman`/`yay`/`paru`/`pamac` is running.
-`cachy-auto-update status` prints every one of these individually, which is the
+- A progress bar shows the step and the package.
-fastest way to find out why nothing is happening.
+- On Btrfs with snapper (the CachyOS default) every update gets a snapshot before and after.
 - A lock file left by a power cut is removed on the next run.
 - Package replacements are handled on their own. File conflicts are never overwritten.
 - A signature error refreshes the keyring once and tries again.
-The machine is **never** restarted on its own. A kernel update that needs a
+</details>
 restart is reported by `cachy-auto-update status`, not by a notification: the
 running kernel loses its module tree the moment pacman unpacks the new one, so
 a bubble would arrive while the run is still building AUR packages and pulling
 Flatpaks — and reads as an invitation to restart in the middle of it.
-## About the password question
+<details>
-
+<summary>Logs</summary>
 The obvious way to automate `yay`/`paru` is to store the user's password
 somewhere. This does not do that, and deliberately so: anything the daemon can
 decrypt is exactly what an attacker who reaches the daemon already has, so the
 encryption would be decoration.
 Instead:
 - The updater is a **system service running as root**, so `pacman` needs no
  escalation at all.
 - `makepkg`, `paru` and `yay` refuse to run as root, so the AUR step drops to a
  dedicated **locked system account** (`cachy-auto-update`, no password,
  `/usr/bin/nologin`, its own home under `/var/lib`). Only root can become it.
 - That account gets one line in `/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update` allowing it
  to call `/usr/bin/pacman` without a password — which is what lets the helper
  install what it built.
 No user password is stored, encrypted or otherwise.
 If you would rather not have that sudoers rule on the machine, set
 `UpdateAUR=no` in the config; everything else keeps working, and the rule
 becomes inert.
 ## Coexisting with manual package management
 Before touching anything, the updater checks for `/var/lib/pacman/db.lck` and
 for a running `pacman`, `yay`, `paru`, `pamac`, `pikaur`, `octopi` or `makepkg`,
 and postpones if it finds one. On a day with no pending repository updates the
 real pacman lock is never taken at all, because `checkupdates` works against a
 private temporary database.
 The reverse direction has an honest limit: if you start `pacman` *while* an
 update is already running, you will get the usual "unable to lock database"
 message. Nothing outside pacman can prevent that. What the updater does do is
 keep the window short, run at low priority, and hold a `systemd-inhibit` lock so
 a suspend or shutdown cannot land in the middle of a transaction.
 A leftover `db.lck` from a crashed transaction is never deleted automatically —
 guessing wrong there corrupts a live transaction. After it has been seen
 unheld on several consecutive runs, you get a notification instead.
 ## What if the machine is switched off mid-update
 Three layers, in order of how much they can actually promise:
 **A notification goes out before the transaction starts** — "Installing
 updates, please leave the computer switched on until this is done" — and is
 withdrawn again when the result arrives, so it costs one bubble rather than
 two. This exists because of what the next paragraph does *not* do.
 **A progress bar sits in the notification area for the whole run**, the same
 one Dolphin puts there while it copies files: which step is running, which
 package is being unpacked, how far along the whole thing is. A twenty-minute
 run that shows nothing looks indistinguishable from a hung one, and that is
 what gets a machine switched off in the middle of a transaction. See
 [The progress bar](#the-progress-bar).
 **Suspend and a normal shutdown are blocked.** The run holds a
 `systemd-inhibit --what=sleep:shutdown --mode=block` lock, so closing the lid or
 picking "Shut down" cannot interrupt a transaction. Be aware of what that looks
 like, though: logind refuses the request and requires the polkit action
 `org.freedesktop.login1.power-off-ignore-inhibit`, which is `auth_admin_keep`.
 The desktop therefore answers a shutdown attempt with an **administrator
 password prompt** reading *"Power off the system while an application is
 inhibiting this"* — a string systemd ships untranslated, and one that never
 mentions updates. No KDE dialog explains the situation. Only `systemctl
 poweroff` in a terminal names the reason. That prompt is exactly why the
 notification above is on by default.
 **A hard power-off cannot be prevented by anything.** Holding the power button
 or pulling the plug cuts power in firmware. What limits the damage is that
 pacman's commit phase is short (about a minute even for a 200-package upgrade)
 and that most of a run is downloading, where an interruption costs nothing but
 a partial file.
 **The next run repairs it.** A `db.lck` left behind is detected and removed —
 but only when it is *provably* dead, meaning it is older than the current boot,
 so no process that could hold it still exists. The interrupted upgrade is then
 simply run again; pacman reinstalls anything that was caught half-written. A
 lock that is merely unheld within the same boot is never removed, only
 reported, because there the guess could be wrong.
 This last part matters more than it sounds: without it, a single power cut
 during an update would leave a lock file that makes every future run defer,
 and the machine would stop updating silently and permanently.
 On a Btrfs system with `snapper` and `snap-pac` — the CachyOS default — every
 pacman transaction is bracketed by a pre and post snapshot, so a genuinely
 broken upgrade can still be rolled back with `snapper rollback`.
 ## How long notifications stay
 A message that means the machine still needs you — an update failed, the
 package database is locked, packages had to be held back — **stays until you
 dismiss it**. That kind of message is only worth sending if it is still there
 when you come back to the machine.
 Everything else times out on its own, a successful update included. Nothing
 should have to be clicked away for having gone right.
 Set per message rather than left to the notification daemon. Daemons do keep
 critical-urgency messages up and the spec asks them to, but that is a *should*,
 it says nothing about the normal-urgency messages here that still need somebody
 to act, and urgency separately controls sound and do-not-disturb bypass — a
 different question. Queued messages delivered at the next login keep the same
 distinction.
 ## The progress bar
 While a run is working, the notification area carries a live entry — headline,
 item count, percentage, and the package currently being unpacked under
 *Details*. It is not a notification but a **job**, the same mechanism Dolphin
 uses for file copies, which is what gets you a bar rather than a line of text.
 Two things about how it is put together:
 - The desktop ties a job to the D-Bus connection that asked for it, and
  withdraws the job the moment that connection closes. One-shot bus clients —
  `gdbus`, `busctl`, `dbus-send` — therefore cannot drive one at all, since
  every invocation is a fresh connection that closes immediately. So a small
  helper (`cachy-auto-update-progress`) runs inside each graphical session for
  the length of the update, holding the connection open and taking instructions
  on stdin. It needs **python-gobject**; without it there is simply no bar and
  nothing else changes.
 - Working out the upgrade, downloading it and unpacking it are three separate
  steps. The first is the one that used to look broken: between
  `:: Starting full system upgrade...` and the transaction it eventually
  prepares, pacman prints nothing at all, and on a large backlog that silence
  runs to minutes. A counter frozen at "0 of 161" reads as a stuck update, so
  that stretch carries a label and deliberately no counter. On a domestic line
  the download is then the longest of the three, and calling the whole thing
  "installing" would leave the bar at 4% for six minutes.
 - A step that turns out to have no work is dropped from the bar rather than
  handed its share for nothing. Packages already in the cache are never
  announced, so a run that only has to unpack skips the download step outright
  instead of leaping 30% the moment unpacking starts — and likewise for AUR
  with nothing pending, or a machine with no Flatpaks. The weights only ever
  have to be right about the steps that actually run.
 - **Expanding *Details* shows the run log's last five lines, live.** The
  percentage says the update is alive; these say what it is alive doing. It
  matters most where there is nothing to count — an AUR package compiling for
  a quarter of an hour talks constantly, and all of it used to go into a file
  nobody was looking at. The job model behind this interface carries exactly
  two description fields (`descriptionValue1` and `2` — there is no third), so
  one holds the current package and the other the tail; newlines inside a value
  do render, which is what makes five lines fit in one field.
 - pacman's output is line-buffered through `stdbuf`. Writing to a log rather
  than a terminal, libc would hand it over in 4 KB blocks instead, and 4 KB of
  `upgrading foo...` is on the order of a hundred and sixty packages arriving
  at once — which is how a bar comes to sit still and then jump to the end.
 - Neither counted phase gets a counter from pacman on an unattended run, so
  both are counted a line at a time — `foo-1.2-1-x86_64 downloading...` and
  `upgrading foo...`. The database sync just before prints the same shape
  (` core downloading...`) with the suffix that would give it away already
  stripped, so counting starts only after pacman's `:: Retrieving packages...`
  header. pacman's other `(n/m)` sequences — checking keys, package integrity,
  loading files — each count to the same total, so only the transaction verbs
  are followed; otherwise the bar would reach the end three times before the
  first package was unpacked.
 This is Plasma's job interface. On a desktop that does not implement it the
 helper exits quietly and the ordinary notifications carry on as before.
 ## Configuration
 `/etc/cachy-auto-update/cachy-auto-update.conf`, one `Key=Value` per line, every
 option documented in the file. The file is parsed rather than sourced, so a
 stray line cannot turn into code executed by root.
 ```ini
 Enabled=yes
 Notifications=yes
 UpdateInterval=1d
 MinBatteryPercent=40
 SkipWhenGaming=yes
 UpdateAUR=yes
 UpdateFlatpak=yes
 UpdateAppImages=yes
 AutoResolveConflicts=yes
 IgnorePkg=
 ```
 ## How package conflicts are handled
 `pacman -Syu --noconfirm` already answers "Replace X with Y?" affirmatively, so
 ordinary replacements happen silently — which is the point.
 What `--noconfirm` declines is `:: X and Y are in conflict. Remove Y? [y/N]`,
 and that aborts the whole transaction. With `AutoResolveConflicts=yes` (the
 default) the transaction is retried once with that question answered too, and
 everything removed is written to the log.
 Two things are deliberately *not* automated:
 - **File conflicts** (`exists in filesystem`) — forcing `--overwrite` could
  silently destroy something that was put there on purpose.
 - **Reboots** — `status` tells you one is due, never a surprise restart.
 Signature failures trigger one keyring refresh and one retry, since a stale
 keyring blocks everything else until it is fixed.
 ## Logs
 ```bash
-cachy-auto-update log        # the last run in full
+cachy-auto-update log        # last run
-cachy-auto-update log -a     # the rolling log
+cachy-auto-update log -a     # all runs
 journalctl -u cachy-auto-update
 ```
-Both work without root.
+</details>
-## Building from source
+<details>
 <summary>cachy-update</summary>
 [cachy-update](https://github.com/CachyOS/cachy-update) tells you about updates, you install them.
 This installs them for you. Both work side by side, and `enable` offers to silence
 cachy-update's notification.
 </details>
 <details>
 <summary>Build from source</summary>
 ```bash
 make && sudo make install
@@ -309,26 +103,8 @@ sudo systemd-sysusers && sudo systemd-tmpfiles --create
 sudo cachy-auto-update enable
 ```
-`make check` runs `bash -n` over every shell file, `py_compile` over the
+Optional: `pacman-contrib`, an AUR helper, `flatpak`, Gear Lever, `libnotify`, `python-gobject`.
 progress helper, `shellcheck` when available, and validates the sudoers drop-in
 with `visudo -c`.
-Everything is optional at runtime and degrades to doing less rather than
+</details>
 failing: `pacman-contrib` for `checkupdates`, an AUR helper, `flatpak`, Gear
 Lever, `libnotify` for notifications, and `python-gobject` for the progress bar.
 ## Relationship to cachy-update
 [cachy-update](https://github.com/CachyOS/cachy-update) is CachyOS's interactive
 updater; every one of its steps sits behind a prompt and its timer only ever
 *checks* for updates and notifies. This tool is the unattended counterpart and
 reimplements the same command sequence non-interactively, adding the battery,
 gaming and lock awareness that unattended operation needs.
 The two coexist. `cachy-auto-update enable` offers once to switch off
 cachy-update's own "N updates available" notification, since it becomes noise
 when updates install themselves.
 ## License
 GPL-3.0-or-later.
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ think about it: repository packages, AUR packages, Flatpaks and AppImages are
 updated in the background, with no password prompt and no terminal.
 Run without a command it opens a small interactive menu with the two switches
-that matter - automatic updates on/off and notifications on/off - plus the
+that matter (automatic updates on/off and notifications on/off), plus the
 current status, and a settings screen covering every remaining option so the
 configuration file never has to be edited by hand. In the settings screen the
 arrow keys select, Space or Right changes a value, and _q_ goes back; every
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ change is written out immediately.
 The actual work is done by a systemd system service. The timer ticks hourly;
 whether a tick does anything is decided by _UpdateInterval_ (daily by default).
-A run that is postponed - low battery, a game running, somebody else using
+A run that is postponed (low battery, a game running, somebody else using
-pacman - is simply retried at the next tick.
+pacman) is simply retried at the next tick.
 # COMMANDS
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Before anything is installed, a run is postponed when:
 - the battery is below _MinBatteryPercent_ (ignored on mains power, and on
  machines without a battery);
 - _RequireAC_ is set and the machine is not plugged in;
- a game is running - detected via GameMode, a list of known game processes, or
+- a game is running, detected via GameMode, a list of known game processes, or
  an application holding a blocking idle inhibitor;
 - pacman's database is locked, or pacman, yay, paru, pamac or a similar tool is
  running.
@@ -84,13 +84,13 @@ A package that has to replace another one is handled silently. If pacman would
 stop to ask whether a conflicting package may be removed, the transaction is
 retried once with that question answered affirmatively, unless
 _AutoResolveConflicts_ is turned off. Files on disk that collide with a package
-are *not* forced - that stays a human decision. A signature failure triggers one
+are *not* forced. That stays a human decision. A signature failure triggers one
 keyring refresh and one retry.
 AUR packages are built and installed as the locked *cachy-auto-update* system
 account, because *makepkg*(8) refuses to run as root. That account has no
-password and no shell, and is allowed - through _/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update_
+password and no shell. Through _/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update_ it is allowed
- to invoke *pacman* without one. No user password is ever stored anywhere.
+to invoke *pacman* without one. No user password is ever stored anywhere.
 A failed AUR build is not reported the first time it happens; only a failure
 that repeats is worth waking somebody up for.
@@ -113,8 +113,9 @@ For as long as a run is working, the notification area carries a live progress
 entry: the step being performed, how many items it has got through, an overall
 percentage, and the package currently being unpacked under "Details". This is a
 job in the sense of *org.kde.JobViewServer*, the same mechanism a file manager
-uses while copying, rather than a notification - which is what makes it a bar
+uses while copying, rather than a notification. That is what makes it a bar
-instead of a line of text.
+instead of a line of text. The desktop pops it up as it opens, so it follows
 _NotifyOnStart_ and is not shown when that is off.
 The desktop withdraws a job as soon as the D-Bus connection that requested it
 closes, so a helper process runs inside each graphical session for the duration
@@ -134,8 +135,8 @@ for minutes at a time looking stuck.
 Expanding "Details" shows the last five lines of the run log as they are
 written, alongside the package currently being worked on. The percentage says
 the update is alive; these lines say what it is alive doing, which matters most
-during the stretches that have nothing countable to report - an AUR package
+during the stretches that have nothing countable to report, above all an AUR
-being compiled, above all. The job interface carries exactly two description
+package being compiled. The job interface carries exactly two description
 fields, so those are the two things shown.
 A step that turns out to have no work is dropped from the bar instead of being
@@ -147,17 +148,17 @@ with nothing pending, or a machine with no Flatpaks installed.
 Neither counted phase gets a counter from pacman on an unattended run, so both
 are counted here, a line at a time: "foo-1.2-1-x86_64 downloading..." for the
 first, "upgrading foo..." for the second. pacman's output is line-buffered
-through *stdbuf*(1) so those lines arrive as they happen - writing to a log
+through *stdbuf*(1) so those lines arrive as they happen. Writing to a log
 rather than a terminal, libc would otherwise release them in 4KB blocks, around
-a hundred and sixty packages at a time. pacman's other (n/m) sequences -
+a hundred and sixty packages at a time. pacman's other (n/m) sequences
-checking keys, package integrity, loading package files - each count up to the
+(checking keys, package integrity, loading package files) each count up to the
 same total and are deliberately ignored.
 # HOW LONG NOTIFICATIONS STAY
-A message that reports the machine still needing a person - an update that
+A message that reports the machine still needing a person stays on screen
-failed, a package database left locked, packages that had to be held back -
+until it is dismissed. For example: an update that failed, a package database
-stays on screen until it is dismissed. A message like that is only worth
+left locked, or packages that had to be held back. A message like that is only worth
 sending if it is still there when somebody comes back to the machine.
 Everything else times out by itself, an update that simply worked included.
@@ -188,10 +189,10 @@ _org.freedesktop.login1.power-off-ignore-inhibit_, which is _auth_admin_keep_,
 so the desktop presents an administrator password prompt reading "Power off the
 system while an application is inhibiting this". That string is shipped
 untranslated by systemd and does not mention updates, and no KDE dialog
-explains the situation either - only *systemctl*(1) names the inhibitor and its
+explains the situation either. Only *systemctl*(1) names the inhibitor and its
 reason. Hence the notification.
-A hard power-off - holding the power button, or losing mains power - is not
+A hard power-off (holding the power button, or losing mains power) is not
 preventable. On the next run a leftover _/var/lib/pacman/db.lck_ is removed if
 it is older than the current boot, since no process able to hold it can still
 exist; the upgrade is then repeated and pacman reinstalls whatever was caught
@@ -230,4 +231,4 @@ _/var/lib/cachy-auto-update/_
 # AUTHOR
 Felitendo. Source and bug reports:
-https://github.com/Felitendo/cachy-auto-update
+https://github.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update
@@ -5,7 +5,8 @@
 msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: cachy-auto-update 1.0.0\n"
-"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: https://github.com/Felitendo/cachy-auto-update/issues\n"
+"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: https://github.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update/"
 "issues\n"
 "POT-Creation-Date: 2026-08-08 00:00+0200\n"
 "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
 "Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
@@ -53,19 +54,28 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid "just now"
 msgstr ""
 msgid "1 minute ago"
 msgstr ""
 #, c-format
 msgid "%d minutes ago"
 msgstr ""
 msgid "1 hour ago"
 msgstr ""
 #, c-format
 msgid "%d hours ago"
 msgstr ""
 msgid "1 day ago"
 msgstr ""
 #, c-format
 msgid "%d days ago"
 msgstr ""
-msgid "The last run reported a problem - see 'cachy-auto-update log'."
+msgid "The last run reported a problem. See 'cachy-auto-update log'."
 msgstr ""
 msgid "A restart is recommended to finish a kernel update."
@@ -162,19 +172,23 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid "/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update is invalid; refusing to enable."
 msgstr ""
-msgid "No AUR helper found - install paru or yay for AUR updates."
+msgid "No AUR helper found. Install paru or yay for AUR updates."
 msgstr ""
-msgid "base-devel is missing - AUR packages cannot be built without it."
+msgid "base-devel is missing, so AUR packages cannot be built."
 msgstr ""
-msgid "cachy-update also notifies about available updates. Turn its notifications off? [Y/n]"
+msgid ""
 "cachy-update also notifies about available updates. Turn its notifications "
 "off? [Y/n]"
 msgstr ""
 msgid "cachy-update's update check has been disabled."
 msgstr ""
-msgid "CachyOS shows a \"Reboot recommended\" notification while an update is still running. Turn it off? [Y/n]"
+msgid ""
 "CachyOS shows a \"Reboot recommended\" notification while an update is still "
 "running. Turn it off? [Y/n]"
 msgstr ""
 #, c-format
@@ -278,13 +292,16 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid "Update failed"
 msgstr ""
-msgid "Something went wrong while updating. Run 'cachy-auto-update log' for details."
+msgid ""
 "Something went wrong while updating. Run 'cachy-auto-update log' for details."
 msgstr ""
 msgid "Package database locked"
 msgstr ""
-msgid "pacman's lock file looks left over from an interrupted update. Updates are paused until it is cleared."
+msgid ""
 "pacman's lock file looks left over from an interrupted update. Updates are "
 "paused until it is cleared."
 msgstr ""
 msgid "Some packages were held back"
@@ -304,13 +321,17 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid "Finishing an interrupted update"
 msgstr ""
-msgid "The last update was cut short, most likely because the machine was switched off. It is being finished now."
+msgid ""
 "The last update was cut short, most likely because the machine was switched "
 "off. It is being finished now."
 msgstr ""
 msgid "Installing updates"
 msgstr ""
-msgid "%d packages are being updated. Please leave the computer switched on until this is done."
+msgid ""
 "%d packages are being updated. Please leave the computer switched on until "
 "this is done."
 msgstr ""
 msgid "Settings"
@@ -319,7 +340,7 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid "(none)"
 msgstr ""
-msgid "Up/Down select - Space or Right changes - q goes back"
+msgid "Up/Down: select, Space or Right: change, q: back"
 msgstr ""
 msgid "Package names separated by spaces, empty to clear:"
@@ -5,7 +5,8 @@
 msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: cachy-auto-update 1.0.0\n"
-"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: https://github.com/Felitendo/cachy-auto-update/issues\n"
+"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: https://github.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update/"
 "issues\n"
 "POT-Creation-Date: 2026-08-08 00:00+0200\n"
 "PO-Revision-Date: 2026-08-08 00:00+0200\n"
 "Last-Translator: Felitendo\n"
@@ -54,20 +55,29 @@ msgstr "%d Pakete"
 msgid "just now"
 msgstr "gerade eben"
 msgid "1 minute ago"
 msgstr "vor 1 Minute"
 #, c-format
 msgid "%d minutes ago"
 msgstr "vor %d Minuten"
 msgid "1 hour ago"
 msgstr "vor 1 Stunde"
 #, c-format
 msgid "%d hours ago"
 msgstr "vor %d Stunden"
 msgid "1 day ago"
 msgstr "vor 1 Tag"
 #, c-format
 msgid "%d days ago"
 msgstr "vor %d Tagen"
-msgid "The last run reported a problem - see 'cachy-auto-update log'."
+msgid "The last run reported a problem. See 'cachy-auto-update log'."
-msgstr "Beim letzten Lauf gab es ein Problem – siehe „cachy-auto-update log“."
+msgstr "Beim letzten Lauf gab es ein Problem. Siehe „cachy-auto-update log“."
 msgid "A restart is recommended to finish a kernel update."
 msgstr "Ein Neustart wird empfohlen, um ein Kernel-Update abzuschließen."
@@ -161,26 +171,37 @@ msgid "Could not enable the systemd timer."
 msgstr "Der systemd-Timer konnte nicht aktiviert werden."
 msgid "/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update is invalid; refusing to enable."
-msgstr "/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update ist fehlerhaft – wird nicht aktiviert."
+msgstr ""
 "/etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update ist fehlerhaft und wird nicht aktiviert."
-msgid "No AUR helper found - install paru or yay for AUR updates."
+msgid "No AUR helper found. Install paru or yay for AUR updates."
-msgstr "Kein AUR-Helper gefunden – für AUR-Updates paru oder yay installieren."
+msgstr "Kein AUR-Helper gefunden. Für AUR-Updates paru oder yay installieren."
-msgid "base-devel is missing - AUR packages cannot be built without it."
+msgid "base-devel is missing, so AUR packages cannot be built."
-msgstr "base-devel fehlt – ohne das lassen sich AUR-Pakete nicht bauen."
+msgstr "base-devel fehlt, daher lassen sich keine AUR-Pakete bauen."
-msgid "cachy-update also notifies about available updates. Turn its notifications off? [Y/n]"
+msgid ""
-msgstr "cachy-update benachrichtigt ebenfalls über verfügbare Updates. Dessen Benachrichtigungen abschalten? [J/n]"
+"cachy-update also notifies about available updates. Turn its notifications "
 "off? [Y/n]"
 msgstr ""
 "cachy-update benachrichtigt ebenfalls über verfügbare Updates. Dessen "
 "Benachrichtigungen abschalten? [J/n]"
 msgid "cachy-update's update check has been disabled."
 msgstr "Die Update-Prüfung von cachy-update wurde abgeschaltet."
-msgid "CachyOS shows a \"Reboot recommended\" notification while an update is still running. Turn it off? [Y/n]"
+msgid ""
-msgstr "CachyOS zeigt eine Benachrichtigung \"Neustart empfohlen\", während ein Update noch läuft. Abschalten? [J/n]"
+"CachyOS shows a \"Reboot recommended\" notification while an update is still "
 "running. Turn it off? [Y/n]"
 msgstr ""
 "CachyOS zeigt eine Benachrichtigung \"Neustart empfohlen\", während ein "
 "Update noch läuft. Abschalten? [J/n]"
 #, c-format
 msgid "The reboot notification has been turned off. Undo it by deleting %s."
-msgstr "Die Neustart-Benachrichtigung wurde abgeschaltet. Rückgängig durch Löschen von %s."
+msgstr ""
 "Die Neustart-Benachrichtigung wurde abgeschaltet. Rückgängig durch Löschen "
 "von %s."
 #, c-format
 msgid "Could not write %s."
@@ -279,21 +300,29 @@ msgstr "%d Updates wurden installiert."
 msgid "Update failed"
 msgstr "Update fehlgeschlagen"
-msgid "Something went wrong while updating. Run 'cachy-auto-update log' for details."
+msgid ""
-msgstr "Beim Update ist etwas schiefgelaufen. Details mit „cachy-auto-update log“."
+"Something went wrong while updating. Run 'cachy-auto-update log' for details."
 msgstr ""
 "Beim Update ist etwas schiefgelaufen. Details mit „cachy-auto-update log“."
 msgid "Package database locked"
 msgstr "Paketdatenbank gesperrt"
-msgid "pacman's lock file looks left over from an interrupted update. Updates are paused until it is cleared."
+msgid ""
-msgstr "Die Sperrdatei von pacman scheint von einem abgebrochenen Update übrig zu sein. Bis sie entfernt ist, pausieren die Updates."
+"pacman's lock file looks left over from an interrupted update. Updates are "
 "paused until it is cleared."
 msgstr ""
 "Die Sperrdatei von pacman scheint von einem abgebrochenen Update übrig zu "
 "sein. Bis sie entfernt ist, pausieren die Updates."
 msgid "Some packages were held back"
 msgstr "Einige Pakete wurden zurückgehalten"
 #, c-format
 msgid "%s could not be updated and was skipped. Everything else is up to date."
-msgstr "%s konnte nicht aktualisiert werden und wurde übersprungen. Alles andere ist aktuell."
+msgstr ""
 "%s konnte nicht aktualisiert werden und wurde übersprungen. Alles andere ist "
 "aktuell."
 #, c-format
 msgid "Held back: %s"
@@ -305,15 +334,23 @@ msgstr "Der letzte Lauf wurde abgebrochen, bevor er fertig war."
 msgid "Finishing an interrupted update"
 msgstr "Abgebrochenes Update wird beendet"
-msgid "The last update was cut short, most likely because the machine was switched off. It is being finished now."
+msgid ""
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-msgstr "%d Pakete werden gerade aktualisiert. Bitte den Rechner so lange eingeschaltet lassen."
+"%d packages are being updated. Please leave the computer switched on until "
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 msgstr "Einstellungen"
@@ -321,8 +358,8 @@ msgstr "Einstellungen"
 msgid "(none)"
 msgstr "(keine)"
-msgid "Up/Down select - Space or Right changes - q goes back"
+msgid "Up/Down: select, Space or Right: change, q: back"
-msgstr "Hoch/Runter wählen – Leertaste oder Rechts ändert – q zurück"
+msgstr "Hoch/Runter: wählen, Leertaste oder Rechts: ändern, q: zurück"
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 msgstr "Paketnamen mit Leerzeichen getrennt, leer zum Löschen:"
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+# Not here to put an entry in the application menu, hence NoDisplay. This is
 # how the desktop learns what to call the update while it runs: the progress
 # bar in the notification area is labelled from the desktop entry named in the
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 # Documentation:      man cachy-auto-update
 # ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
-# Main switches - normally set through `cachy-auto-update enable/disable`
+# Main switches, normally set through `cachy-auto-update enable/disable`
 # ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
 # Apply updates automatically in the background.
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ IgnorePkg=
 # installed packages, and every cached version of packages that are no longer
 # installed. Nothing that is currently installed is ever touched, so this only
 # costs the ability to downgrade further back than KeepOldPackages.
-# Without it /var/cache/pacman/pkg grows forever - tens of gigabytes on a
+# Without it /var/cache/pacman/pkg grows forever: tens of gigabytes on a
 # machine with a few large packages.
 CleanCache=yes
@@ -97,8 +97,8 @@ RemoveOrphans=no
 #
 # How long a message stays on screen is not configurable, because it follows
 # from what the message is for: anything reporting that the machine still needs
-# a person - a failed update, a paused package queue, a package that had to be
+# a person (a failed update, a paused package queue, a package that had to be
-# skipped - waits until it is dismissed, since a message like that is only ever
+# skipped) waits until it is dismissed, since a message like that is only ever
 # useful if it is still there when somebody comes back. Everything else, an
 # update that simply worked included, times out on its own.
@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@ RemoveOrphans=no
 # password prompt that never mentions updates. The message is withdrawn again
 # when the result arrives, so it costs one bubble, not two.
 #
-# Separate from the progress bar in the notification area, which is not
+# Also turns the progress bar in the notification area on or off. The desktop
-# optional and appears whenever the desktop supports one.
+# pops it up as it opens, so it counts as a start notice too.
 NotifyOnStart=yes
 # Say something after a successful update. Nothing is ever shown when there
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 [Unit]
 Description=CachyOS unattended update run
 Documentation=man:cachy-auto-update(1)
-Documentation=https://github.com/Felitendo/cachy-auto-update
+Documentation=https://github.com/LoonixTools/cachy-auto-update
 After=network-online.target
 Wants=network-online.target
 ConditionPathExists=/etc/cachy-auto-update/cachy-auto-update.conf
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ TimeoutStartSec=4h
 # Deliberately *not* sandboxed the way paccache.service is: this unit installs
 # packages across the whole filesystem and downloads them over the network, so
 # ProtectSystem=, PrivateNetwork= and friends would break it. NoNewPrivileges
-# in particular has to stay off - the AUR step relies on the build account
+# in particular has to stay off, because the AUR step relies on the build
-# calling sudo.
+# account calling sudo.
 NoNewPrivileges=no
 ProtectHostname=yes
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Documentation=man:cachy-auto-update(1)
 [Timer]
 # The tick is hourly, but an actual update only happens once per
 # UpdateInterval (default: daily). That combination is what makes a postponed
-# run - low battery, a game running, somebody else using pacman - retry by
+# run (low battery, a game running, somebody else using pacman) retry by
 # itself an hour later without any backoff bookkeeping.
 OnBootSec=15min
 OnCalendar=hourly
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #!/usr/bin/env bash
 #
-# cachy-auto-update - unattended updates for CachyOS
+# cachy-auto-update: unattended updates for CachyOS
 #
 # The command line front end. Everything it does is either flipping a switch in
 # /etc/cachy-auto-update/cachy-auto-update.conf, driving the systemd timer, or
@@ -77,10 +77,10 @@ cau_do_enable() {
 	cau_config_load
 	if [[ $CFG_AUR == yes ]] && ! cau_aur_detect_quiet; then
-		cau_note "$(cau_msg "No AUR helper found - install paru or yay for AUR updates.")"
+		cau_note "$(cau_msg "No AUR helper found. Install paru or yay for AUR updates.")"
 	fi
 	if [[ $CFG_AUR == yes ]] && ! cau_have makepkg; then
-		cau_note "$(cau_msg "base-devel is missing - AUR packages cannot be built without it.")"
+		cau_note "$(cau_msg "base-devel is missing, so AUR packages cannot be built.")"
 	fi
 	cau_offer_disable_cachy_update
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ cau_do_enable() {
 # CachyOS ships a pacman hook that pops up "Reboot recommended!" the moment a
 # kernel, driver or systemd package is unpacked. During a manual upgrade that
-# is fine - the transaction is the last thing happening. During an unattended
+# is fine, because the transaction is the last thing happening. During an unattended
 # one it lands in the middle: the run still has AUR packages to build and
 # Flatpaks to pull, and a notification asking for a restart right then is an
 # invitation to cut the update in half.
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ cau_aur_detect_quiet() {
 # cachy-update ships an enabled user timer that only ever says "N updates
 # available". Once updates apply themselves that notification is pure noise,
-# so offer to silence it - but only ask, never decide.
+# so offer to silence it. But only ask, never decide.
 cau_offer_disable_cachy_update() {
 	local user uid answer found=0
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ cau_offer_disable_cachy_update() {
 	read -r answer || return 0
 	# Defaults to yes: once updates install themselves, cachy-update's "N
-	# updates available" is purely noise. "j" is accepted too - the prompt is
+	# updates available" is purely noise. "j" is accepted too: the prompt is
 	# translated, so a German user types the German letter and used to have
 	# that silently read as "no".
 	case "${answer,,}" in
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #!/usr/bin/env python3
 #
-# cachy-auto-update-progress - the update's progress bar on the desktop
+# cachy-auto-update-progress: the update's progress bar on the desktop
 #
 # Started by the update runner, once per logged-in user, inside that user's
 # session. Reads one instruction per line on stdin and turns it into the same
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 #
 # Why a separate process at all: the desktop ties the progress entry to the
 # D-Bus connection that asked for it and withdraws the entry the moment that
-# connection goes away. One-shot callers - gdbus, busctl, dbus-send - therefore
+# connection goes away. One-shot callers (gdbus, busctl, dbus-send) therefore
 # cannot drive one, because each invocation is its own connection that closes
 # again immediately. So something has to sit there and hold the connection open
 # for as long as the update takes, and read its orders from somewhere else.
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ class Job:
        reply = self.bus.call_sync(
            JOB_SERVICE, JOB_PATH, "org.kde.JobViewServerV2", "requestView",
            # capabilities 0: no cancel and no pause button. Neither can be
-            # honoured - pacman's commit phase is not interruptible - and a
+            # honoured, because pacman's commit phase is not interruptible. A
            # button that does nothing is worse than no button.
            GLib.Variant("(sia{sv})", (DESKTOP_ENTRY, 0, {})),
            GLib.VariantType("(o)"), Gio.DBusCallFlags.NONE, -1, None)
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ class Job:
                JOB_SERVICE, self.path, "org.kde.JobViewV2", method, variant,
                None, Gio.DBusCallFlags.NONE, -1, None)
        except GLib.Error:
-            # The desktop went away mid-update - a logout, or a plasmashell
+            # The desktop went away mid-update (a logout, or a plasmashell
-            # restart. The update carries on without a bar.
+            # restart). The update carries on without a bar.
            self.path = None
    def close(self, message=""):
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ def main():
    try:
        job.open()
    except GLib.Error:
-        # No job server on this desktop - anything that is not Plasma. Same
+        # No job server on this desktop (anything that is not Plasma). Same
        # deal as a missing binding: drain stdin, stay out of the way.
        for _ in sys.stdin:
            pass
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #!/usr/bin/env bash
 #
-# cachy-auto-update-run - one unattended update pass
+# cachy-auto-update-run: one unattended update pass
 #
 # Started by cachy-auto-update.service as root. The timer fires hourly and this
 # decides whether anything should happen; that is what makes deferrals free.
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ fi
 # Force a neutral locale here rather than relying on the unit's Environment=,
 # so a run started by hand behaves exactly like one started by the timer.
 # pacman failures are classified by matching its output, and on a German system
-# that output is German. Text aimed at a person does not come through here - a
+# that output is German. Text aimed at a person does not come through here: a
 # notification is rendered in the recipient's own locale by cau_msg_in.
 export LC_ALL=C LANGUAGE=
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ cau_log_open
 # Record an interruption rather than leaving the previous run's verdict behind.
 # Without this, killing an interactive run leaves last_result at whatever it was
-# before - so the menu can keep reporting a problem from hours ago while the
+# before. Then the menu can keep reporting a problem from hours ago while the
 # machine is in fact fully up to date, which is worse than saying nothing.
 # pacman makes the commit phase itself uninterruptible, so the packages either
 # all landed or none did; only our own bookkeeping is at risk here.
@@ -193,8 +193,8 @@ progress_steps+=(cleanup)
 cau_progress_begin "${progress_steps[@]}"
 # And carry the run log's last lines along with it, so "Details" shows what the
-# update is doing during the stretches that have nothing to count - an AUR
+# update is doing during the stretches that have nothing to count. Most of all
-# package building for a quarter of an hour, most of all.
+# an AUR package building for a quarter of an hour.
 cau_progress_tail_start "$CAU_RUNLOG"
 if ! cau_pacman_update; then
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ fi
 # Recorded, deliberately not announced. The running kernel loses its module
 # tree the moment pacman unpacks the new one, so this turns true partway
-# through a run that still has AUR builds and Flatpaks ahead of it - and a
+# through a run that still has AUR builds and Flatpaks ahead of it. A
 # "restart recommended" bubble arriving then reads as an invitation to restart
 # while the update is still going. `cachy-auto-update status` and the menu say
 # so instead, where nobody is being interrupted mid-transaction.
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ export TEXTDOMAINDIR="${CAU_LOCALEDIR}"
 #
 # Standard POSIX precedence, deliberately: LC_ALL wins outright, and LC_ALL=C
 # really does mean English. The service sets LC_ALL=C so that pacman and upower
-# stay parseable, which makes the log English - correct, since the log is a
+# stay parseable, which makes the log English. That is correct, since the log
-# technical artefact. Anything aimed at a person (a desktop notification) does
+# is a technical artefact. Anything aimed at a person (a desktop notification) does
 # not go through here at all; it names the recipient's own locale explicitly
 # via cau_msg_in and cau_user_locale.
 cau_ui_locale() {
@@ -117,8 +117,8 @@ cau_msg_in() {
 	fi
 	# With no arguments the message is plain text, not a format string. Feeding
-	# it to printf anyway turns any literal percent sign in it - "Battery (%)",
+	# it to printf anyway turns any literal percent sign in it (like
-	# "100 % done" - into an invalid conversion, and that is a trap every
+	# "Battery (%)" or "100 % done") into an invalid conversion, and that is a trap every
 	# translator would eventually walk into.
 	if (( $# == 0 )); then
 		printf '%s' "$translated"
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ cau_log_open() {
 # Runs a command, capturing its combined output in the run log. Returns the
 # command's exit status.
 #
-# When a person is watching - `cachy-auto-update run` from a terminal - the
+# When a person is watching (`cachy-auto-update run` from a terminal), the
 # output is shown as well. Building an AUR package or pulling a few hundred
 # megabytes of Flatpak can take minutes, and silence for that long is
 # indistinguishable from a hang.
@@ -207,8 +207,8 @@ cau_run_logged() {
 # Set by cau_bad and cau_note. The menu redraws immediately after an action,
 # which would wipe the screen; this marks that something was printed that the
 # user still has to read, so only those cases wait for a keypress. A plain
-# success needs no acknowledgement - the status block at the top of the menu
+# success needs no acknowledgement, because the status block at the top of the
-# already shows the new state.
+# menu already shows the new state.
 CAU_UI_NEEDS_ACK=''
 cau_say()  { printf '%s\n' "$*"; }
@@ -282,8 +282,11 @@ cau_time_ago() {
 	(( delta < 0 )) && delta=0
 	if   (( delta < 60 ));     then cau_msg "just now"
 	elif (( delta < 120 ));    then cau_msg "1 minute ago"
 	elif (( delta < 3600 ));   then cau_msg "%d minutes ago" "$(( delta / 60 ))"
 	elif (( delta < 7200 ));   then cau_msg "1 hour ago"
 	elif (( delta < 86400 ));  then cau_msg "%d hours ago" "$(( delta / 3600 ))"
 	elif (( delta < 172800 )); then cau_msg "1 day ago"
 	else                            cau_msg "%d days ago" "$(( delta / 86400 ))"
 	fi
 	printf '\n'
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ CAU_SKIP_REASON=''
 # cau_on_ac
 # True when running on mains power. systemd-ac-power also returns success when
 # the machine has neither a battery nor an adapter, which is exactly right for
-# desktops - hand-rolled sysfs globbing gets that case wrong.
+# desktops. Hand-rolled sysfs globbing gets that case wrong.
 cau_on_ac() {
 	if cau_have systemd-ac-power; then
 		systemd-ac-power > /dev/null 2>&1
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ cau_on_ac() {
 # cau_battery_percent
 # Average charge across the system batteries, or failure when the machine has
 # none. Peripheral batteries (mice, headsets) advertise type=Battery too and
-# are filtered out via the scope attribute; when scope is missing entirely -
+# are filtered out via the scope attribute. When scope is missing entirely (as
-# as on many laptops - the device counts as a system battery.
+# on many laptops), the device counts as a system battery.
 cau_battery_percent() {
 	local ps sum=0 count=0 cap
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ cau_gamemode_active() {
 	while read -r user uid; do
 		[[ -n $user ]] || continue
 		# timeout runs inside the runuser call because it has to be a real
-		# binary there - it cannot wrap a shell function from out here.
+		# binary there. It cannot wrap a shell function from out here.
 		out="$(cau_as_user "$user" "$uid" timeout 5 busctl --user --json=short \
 			get-property com.feralinteractive.GameMode \
 			/com/feralinteractive/GameMode \
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 #
 # The contract this file implements: the machine's owner may run any package
 # manager at any time and must never see a lock error caused by us. We can only
-# guarantee that in one direction - by never *starting* while somebody else is
+# guarantee that in one direction: by never *starting* while somebody else is
-# mid-transaction - so the checks here run before anything is touched, and a
+# mid-transaction. So the checks here run before anything is touched, and a
 # refusal simply defers the run to the next hourly tick.
 # Package managers that take /var/lib/pacman/db.lck. checkupdates is absent on
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ cau_package_manager_busy() {
 #
 # The rigorous test is the boot time: no process that existed before the
 # current boot can still be running, so a db.lck older than boot is abandoned
-# by definition - which is exactly what a power cut during an update leaves
+# by definition. That is exactly what a power cut during an update leaves
 # behind. A lock that is merely unheld *within* this boot is not provable in
 # the same way, so it is only reported (see cau_track_stale_lock) and never
 # removed; guessing wrong there would corrupt a live transaction.
@@ -90,12 +90,12 @@ cau_pacman_lock_is_stale() {
 # cau_recover_stale_lock
 # Clears a provably abandoned lock so an interrupted update can be finished on
 # the next run. Without this, one power cut during an update stops every future
-# update permanently and silently - the worst possible outcome for a machine
+# update permanently and silently. That is the worst possible outcome for a
-# nobody is watching.
+# machine nobody is watching.
 cau_recover_stale_lock() {
 	cau_pacman_lock_is_stale || return 1
-	cau_warn "Found a pacman lock older than this boot - an update was cut short"
+	cau_warn "Found a pacman lock older than this boot. An update was cut short"
 	rm -f "$CAU_PACMAN_LOCK" 2>/dev/null || {
 		cau_error "Could not remove the stale pacman lock"
 		return 1
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ cau_ui_term_restore() {
 }
 # Runs an action with the terminal handed back to normal line mode, so anything
-# it prints - or prompts for - behaves the way a program expects.
+# it prints or prompts for behaves the way a program expects.
 cau_ui_cooked() {
 	cau_ui_term_restore
 	"$@"
@@ -213,8 +213,8 @@ _cau_setting_cycle() {
 # A cursor list rather than a numbered menu: there are eighteen settings, and
 # numbering them would run out of digits and force paging.
 #
-# The frame is assembled in memory and written once. Everything constant - the
+# The frame is assembled in memory and written once. Everything constant (the
-# specs, the translated labels, the clear sequence - is resolved before the
+# specs, the translated labels, the clear sequence) is resolved before the
 # loop, and the values are re-read only after something actually changes.
 # Drawing the naive way cost a command substitution per label per frame, which
 # measured 435 ms per keypress: arrow keys felt like the console was reloading,
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ cau_ui_settings() {
 	local title hint
 	cau_msg_into "$locale" "Settings"; title="$CAU_MSG_RESULT"
-	cau_msg_into "$locale" "Up/Down select - Space or Right changes - q goes back"
+	cau_msg_into "$locale" "Up/Down: select, Space or Right: change, q: back"
 	hint="$CAU_MSG_RESULT"
 	# the terminfo clear string, fetched once instead of forking per frame
@@ -320,8 +320,8 @@ cau_ui_edit_text() {
 # _cau_row <label> <value>
 # printf's %-28s pads by bytes, so a label containing "ü" comes out one column
 # short. ${#s} counts characters in a UTF-8 locale, so the padding is computed
-# here instead - and applied inline, because command substitution would eat the
+# here instead. It is applied inline, because command substitution would eat
-# trailing spaces again.
+# the trailing spaces again.
 _cau_row() {
 	local label="$1" value="$2" pad
 	pad=$(( 28 - ${#label} ))
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ cau_ui_status() {
 	if [[ $result == failed ]]; then
 		printf '\n  %s%s%s\n' "$CAU_C_YELLOW" \
-			"$(cau_msg "The last run reported a problem - see 'cachy-auto-update log'.")" \
+			"$(cau_msg "The last run reported a problem. See 'cachy-auto-update log'.")" \
 			"$CAU_C_RESET"
 	elif [[ $result == interrupted ]]; then
 		printf '\n  %s%s%s\n' "$CAU_C_YELLOW" \
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ cau_ui_menu() {
 			5) cau_ui_status_conditions; cau_pause ;;
 			6) cau_ui_settings ;;
 			q|Q) cau_ui_term_restore; trap - EXIT INT TERM; return 0 ;;
-			# Anything else - Enter, arrow keys, stray characters - just
+			# Anything else (Enter, arrow keys, stray characters) just
 			# redraws. Escape is deliberately not a quit key, so a mistyped
 			# arrow key cannot close the menu.
 			*) ;;
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 # Desktop notifications from a root system service.
 #
 # Two paths exist:
-#   * live   - somebody has a graphical session, so notify-send is run inside
+#   * live:   somebody has a graphical session, so notify-send is run inside
 #             it via runuser with the session bus address set;
-#   * queued - nobody is logged in, so the message is appended to a spool that
+#   * queued: nobody is logged in, so the message is appended to a spool that
 #             the XDG autostart entry replays at the next login.
 #
 # Messages travel as a msgid plus printf arguments rather than as finished
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ cau_notify_close() {
 # had to be skipped is only ever seen if it waits.
 #
 # Set explicitly rather than left to the server. Notification daemons do keep
-# critical-urgency messages up - the spec asks them to, and Plasma obliges -
+# critical-urgency messages up (the spec asks them to, and Plasma obliges).
-# but that is a "should", it says nothing about the normal-urgency messages
+# But that is a "should", it says nothing about the normal-urgency messages
 # here that still need somebody to act, and urgency separately controls sound
 # and whether do-not-disturb is overridden. Those are not the same question.
 #
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ cau_notify_enqueue() {
 	printf '%s\n' "$record" >> "$CAU_NOTIFY_QUEUE" 2>/dev/null || return 0
-	# keep the spool bounded - nobody wants three weeks of backlog at login
+	# keep the spool bounded: nobody wants three weeks of backlog at login
 	if (( $(wc -l < "$CAU_NOTIFY_QUEUE" 2>/dev/null || echo 0) > CAU_NOTIFY_QUEUE_MAX )); then
 		tmp="$(mktemp "${CAU_NOTIFY_QUEUE}.XXXXXX")" || return 0
 		tail -n "$CAU_NOTIFY_QUEUE_MAX" "$CAU_NOTIFY_QUEUE" > "$tmp"
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
 #
 # AppImages have no package manager of their own; Gear Lever is what tracks
 # where each one came from and how to fetch a new build. Its CLI is a first
-# class interface - `--update --all -y` is exactly the unattended entry point
+# class interface: `--update --all -y` is exactly the unattended entry point
 # we need, and it skips AppImages whose application is currently running rather
 # than pulling the file out from under it (we deliberately do not pass
 # --force).
 #
 # This only runs for users with a live graphical session: Gear Lever is a
 # Flatpak GTK application and needs the session's runtime directory. Nothing is
-# lost by waiting - the next hourly tick will catch it once they log in.
+# lost by waiting, because the next hourly tick will catch it once they log in.
 CAU_APPIMAGE_ID="it.mijorus.gearlever"
 CAU_APPIMAGE_COUNT=0
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ cau_appimage_update() {
 	# Is there a Gear Lever on this machine at all? Asked before the step is
 	# announced rather than discovered inside the loop: on a machine without
-	# one - the common case, it is an optional dependency - a step that exists
+	# one (the common case, it is an optional dependency), a step that exists
 	# only to hand its share of the bar straight to the next one is a jump the
 	# bar does not need. Stops at the first user who has it, so the extra probe
 	# costs anything only in the case it is there to remove.
@@ -2,15 +2,15 @@
 #
 # AUR packages.
 #
-# makepkg - and therefore paru and yay - refuse to run as root, so this is the
+# makepkg (and therefore paru and yay) refuse to run as root, so this is the
 # one part of the run that cannot happen in the service's own context. It is
 # executed as the locked "cachy-auto-update" system account instead, which
 # sysusers.d creates with no password and no shell. That account is granted
 # NOPASSWD access to /usr/bin/pacman through /etc/sudoers.d/cachy-auto-update,
 # which is what lets the helper install what it built without a human present.
 #
-# The alternative - stashing the user's password somewhere the daemon can read
+# The alternative (stashing the user's password somewhere the daemon can read
-# it - buys nothing: whatever can decrypt it is exactly what an attacker would
+# it) buys nothing: whatever can decrypt it is exactly what an attacker would
 # already have.
 CAU_AUR_COUNT=0
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 # System-wide installations are updated directly as root. That side-steps a
 # real obstacle: the shipped polkit rule for Flatpak only grants install and
 # uninstall, and only to a subject that is active, local and in the wheel
-# group - none of which is true for an unattended service. Being root means
+# group. None of that is true for an unattended service. Being root means
 # polkit is never consulted in the first place.
 #
 # Per-user installations live in the user's home and are updated inside their
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ cau_flatpak_update() {
 		fi
 	done < <(cau_human_users)
-	# Unused runtimes are the Flatpak equivalent of orphaned packages - this is
+	# Unused runtimes are the Flatpak equivalent of orphaned packages. This is
 	# removal of installed software, not cache trimming, so it belongs behind
 	# RemoveOrphans rather than CleanCache.
 	if [[ $CFG_REMOVE_ORPHANS == yes ]]; then
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ CAU_PACMAN_OP_RE='^(\([[:space:]]*[0-9]+/[0-9]+\) )?(upgrading|installing|reinst
 #
 #    glibc-2.44+r24+g16be1518495f-1-x86_64_v3 downloading...
 #
-# and nothing else - no counter, no total - so the position here is counted the
+# and nothing else: no counter, no total. So the position here is counted the
 # same way the transaction is.
 #
 # The database sync a few lines earlier prints the very same shape (" core
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ CAU_PACMAN_DL_AWK='
 # Feeds the desktop's progress bar by watching pacman work, through the three
 # phases a pacman run has: first it works out what the upgrade consists of,
 # then everything is fetched, then everything is unpacked. Three steps on the
-# bar rather than one, because they are three stretches to sit through - and
+# bar rather than one, because they are three stretches to sit through. And
 # each one is silent in its own way.
 #
 # The first is the one that used to look like a hang. Between "starting full
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ CAU_PACMAN_DL_AWK='
 #
 # Only the second carries a counter, and the unattended runs that this bar
 # exists for are exactly the ones that do not get it. So the position is
-# counted here instead - one line per package - and the total taken from the
+# counted here instead (one line per package), and the total taken from the
 # "Package (218)" header pacman prints before it starts. That header is the
 # better number anyway: checkupdates counts packages with an update available
 # and knows nothing about the new dependencies pulled in alongside them.
@@ -104,9 +104,9 @@ _cau_pacman_progress_watch() {
 		if [[ -n $line ]]; then
 			# Unpacking has started, so whatever came before it is over. If
-			# nothing was ever retrieved - every package already sitting in the
+			# nothing was ever retrieved (every package already sitting in the
-			# cache, which is the ordinary state of affairs after a run that was
+			# cache, which is normal after a run that was interrupted once
-			# interrupted once already - then the download step never happened,
+			# already), then the download step never happened,
 			# and it is dropped rather than handed its whole share of the bar in
 			# exchange for no work at all.
 			if [[ $phase != install ]]; then
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ _cau_pacman_exec() {
 	fi
 	# Line-buffered on purpose. pacman writes to a file or through a pipe here,
-	# never to a terminal, so libc buffers it in 4KB blocks - and 4KB of
+	# never to a terminal, so libc buffers it in 4KB blocks. And 4KB of
 	# "upgrading foo..." is on the order of a hundred and sixty packages. The
 	# watcher would see nothing at all, then a hundred and sixty lines at once,
 	# which is exactly how a bar comes to sit still and then leap to the end.
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ cau_pacman_update() {
 	#
 	# While an upgrade runs, a shutdown request is refused by logind and the
 	# desktop answers with a polkit password prompt reading "Power off the
-	# system while an application is inhibiting this" - which never mentions
+	# system while an application is inhibiting this". That never mentions
 	# updates and, on a German system, is not even translated. Somebody who was
 	# simply told beforehand does not end up staring at that.
 	if [[ $CFG_NOTIFY_START == yes ]]; then
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ cau_pacman_update() {
 			dependency)
 				# Something installed still depends on a package the repos want
-				# to drop or replace - almost always an AUR package that has not
+				# to drop or replace, almost always an AUR package that has not
 				# caught up yet. Nothing here can fix that, and it is not worth
 				# failing over: letting one stuck package block every other
 				# update indefinitely is far worse on an unattended machine.
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ cau_pacman_cleanup() {
 		reclaim="$( { paccache -d --nocolor -k"$CFG_KEEP_OLD"; paccache -du --nocolor -k0; } 2>&1 \
 			| grep -oE 'disk space saved: [^)]*' | paste -sd', ' -)"
-		cau_info "Trimming the package cache (keeping $CFG_KEEP_OLD old version(s))${reclaim:+ - $reclaim}"
+		cau_info "Trimming the package cache (keeping $CFG_KEEP_OLD old version(s))${reclaim:+: $reclaim}"
 		cau_run_logged paccache -r --nocolor -k"$CFG_KEEP_OLD"  || cau_warn "paccache -r failed"
 		cau_run_logged paccache -ru --nocolor -k0               || cau_warn "paccache -ru failed"
 	fi
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 # The update's progress bar on the desktop.
 #
 # An unattended upgrade can take twenty minutes, and for most of that a user is
-# told only that "an update is running". This drives the desktop's job list -
+# told only that "an update is running". This drives the desktop's job list
-# the same widget that shows a bar while Dolphin copies files - so how far
+# (the same widget that shows a bar while Dolphin copies files), so how far
 # along the run is stays visible the whole time.
 #
 # The desktop ends the progress entry as soon as the D-Bus connection that
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
 # of those pipes, plus the arithmetic that turns "package 120 of 260 in the
 # repository step" into one number for the bar.
 #
-# Absent anywhere along the way - no session, no Plasma, no Python bindings -
+# If anything is missing along the way (no session, no Plasma, no Python
-# this does nothing at all and the update proceeds exactly as before.
+# bindings), this does nothing at all and the update proceeds exactly as before.
 CAU_PROGRESS_HELPER="${CAU_LIBEXECDIR}/cachy-auto-update-progress"
@@ -26,14 +26,14 @@ CAU_PROGRESS_FIFOS=()
 CAU_PROGRESS_LOCALES=()
 # What each step is worth on the bar. Rough shares of a typical run rather than
-# anything measured: the repositories dominate - fetching them and unpacking
+# anything measured: the repositories dominate (fetching them and unpacking
-# them about equally, on a domestic line - and the cleanup is a rounding error.
+# them about equally, on a domestic line), and the cleanup is a rounding error.
-# They do not have to add up to 100 - only the steps a given run will actually
+# They do not have to add up to 100. Only the steps a given run will actually
 # perform are counted, and the total is normalised against those.
 #
 # "resolve" is everything pacman does before it has a transaction: syncing the
 # databases and working out what the upgrade actually consists of. It is
-# usually seconds, which is why it is worth so little - but on a large backlog
+# usually seconds, which is why it is worth so little. But on a large backlog
 # it is minutes, and those minutes used to be spent looking at a bar that had
 # not moved yet.
 declare -A CAU_PROGRESS_WEIGHTS=(
@@ -95,6 +95,8 @@ cau_progress_begin() {
 	(( CAU_PROGRESS_SCALE > 0 )) || return 0
 	[[ $CFG_NOTIFICATIONS == yes ]] || return 0
 	# The desktop pops the bar up as it opens, which reads as a start notice.
 	[[ $CFG_NOTIFY_START == yes ]] || return 0
 	[[ -x $CAU_PROGRESS_HELPER ]] || return 0
 	mkdir -p "$CAU_RUNDIR" 2>/dev/null || return 0
@@ -147,7 +149,7 @@ cau_progress_active() {
 # turns up while it runs: nothing to download because every package was already
 # in the cache, no AUR updates pending, no Flatpaks installed. A step like that
 # keeps its whole share of the bar and then hands it over in a single jump the
-# moment the next one starts - which is precisely the stutter this is here to
+# moment the next one starts. That is precisely the stutter this is here to
 # remove. Dropping it hands its share to the steps that do have work instead,
 # so the bar advances at a steady pace rather than leaping across the gaps.
 #
@@ -243,7 +245,7 @@ _cau_progress_pct() {
 	# Never backwards. Two honest things can ask for that: dropping a step
 	# rescales the run against a smaller total, and the conflict-recovery loop
-	# restarts pacman - and with it the item tally - from the top. Both are
+	# restarts pacman (and with it the item tally) from the top. Both are
 	# real, neither is a reason to show somebody a bar that retreats.
 	(( pct < CAU_PROGRESS_SHOWN )) && pct=$CAU_PROGRESS_SHOWN
@@ -282,16 +284,16 @@ cau_progress_item() {
 # whatsoever between "starting full system upgrade" and the transaction it
 # eventually prepares; an AUR helper compiling a package prints plenty, none of
 # it countable. On a large backlog either is minutes. There is no honest number
-# to show for that - but a bar that has not moved since it appeared is read as
+# to show for that. But a bar that has not moved since it appeared is read as
 # a hang, and somebody who reads it that way reaches for the power button in
 # the middle of an update. That is the failure this is here to prevent.
 #
 # So it creeps, along a curve that approaches the end of the step without ever
 # reaching it: half the step's share after HALFLIFE seconds, three quarters
 # after three times that, the whole of it never. Nothing is claimed that is not
-# known - the item counter stays empty throughout, which is the field that
+# known: the item counter stays empty throughout, and it is the field that
-# would be lying if it moved - and the step still finishes the instant real
+# would be lying if it moved. The step still finishes the instant real work
-# work reports in, because every real report is further along than the creep.
+# reports in, because every real report is further along than the creep.
 #
 # Confined to the step's own span, so a creep can never overtake the step that
 # comes after it however long it is left running.
@@ -324,8 +326,8 @@ cau_progress_creep_start() {
 		# reason cau_progress_begin opens its fifo read-write: a pipe held open
 		# at both ends never reports end-of-file, so a timed read on it blocks
 		# for exactly the timeout and nothing else. A forked sleep would also
-		# survive the kill below - it is a child of this subshell, not this
+		# survive the kill below (it is a child of this subshell, not this
-		# subshell - and inherit the fifo's write end, which would keep the
+		# subshell) and inherit the fifo's write end, which would keep the
 		# helper from seeing the end of its input until the sleep ran out.
 		local nap
 		exec {nap}<> <(:)
@@ -345,15 +347,15 @@ cau_progress_creep_stop() {
 	# The ticker moved the bar from inside a subshell, so this side never saw
 	# it happen and still believes the bar is where it was left. Catching up
-	# costs one recomputation - the curve is a function of elapsed time and
+	# costs one recomputation, since the curve is a function of elapsed time and
-	# nothing else - and without it the next ordinary report from here would be
+	# nothing else. Without it the next ordinary report from here would be
 	# measured against a stale percentage and send the bar backwards.
 	cau_progress_creep $(( SECONDS - CAU_PROGRESS_CREEP_T0 ))
 }
 # cau_progress_detail <label-msgid> <value>
-# A labelled line under the entry's "Details" - which package is being unpacked
+# A labelled line under the entry's "Details", for example which package is
-# right now, say.
+# being unpacked right now.
 cau_progress_detail() {
 	local label="$1" value="$2" i fd
@@ -383,7 +385,7 @@ CAU_PROGRESS_TAIL_PID=0
 #
 # The protocol is one instruction per line, so the tail travels tab separated
 # and is put back together on the other side. Tabs inside a log line would
-# split it in two on the way, so they become spaces first - the job view
+# split it in two on the way, so they become spaces first. The job view
 # renders either as whitespace, and a line broken in half renders as nonsense.
 cau_progress_log() {
 	local label="$1" text="$2" i fd
@@ -465,12 +467,12 @@ cau_progress_end() {
 	# Before the descriptors go: anything still running in the background holds
 	# its own copy of them, so the helper would not see the end of its input
-	# until it exited - and it is about to be waited on.
+	# until it exited. And it is about to be waited on.
 	cau_progress_creep_stop
 	cau_progress_tail_stop
-	# The last step never consumes its own share - nothing reports items for
+	# The last step never consumes its own share (nothing reports items for
-	# the cleanup - so the bar would stop a few percent short of the end and
+	# the cleanup), so the bar would stop a few percent short of the end and
 	# vanish there. Only on the way out of a run that actually worked, though:
 	# filling the bar for a failed update says the opposite of what happened.
 	[[ $outcome == ok ]] && _cau_progress_line 'percent\t100'
Author	SHA1	Message	Date
Felitendo	776a39074d	docs: show new ui as screenshots in the readme	2026-09-28 15:08:14 +02:00
Felitendo	c5a4ffbe08	chore: 1.3.2	2026-09-28 14:40:06 +02:00
Felitendo	1078bd52ab	fix: hide the progress bar when start notices are off Fixes #2	2026-09-28 14:40:00 +02:00
Felitendo	9a471a005d	chore: show feature requests before bug reports	2026-09-26 21:19:28 +02:00
Felitendo	b78f1629ad	chore: commit different topics separately	2026-09-25 09:30:38 +02:00
Felitendo	0f5e41cc5c	chore: switch to ko-fi	2026-09-24 13:21:19 +02:00
Felitendo	1e02e0dfa8	chore: add issue templates	2026-09-24 12:39:49 +02:00
Felitendo	47d5862b5f	docs: commit and push only after a local check	2026-09-24 08:42:01 +02:00
Felitendo	f4b7a26dec	chore: 1.3.1	2026-09-24 02:01:04 +02:00
Felitendo	7cd6eafafe	docs: cut the readme down, fold the details	2026-09-24 02:00:35 +02:00
Felitendo	08ffaad00b	fix: say 1 minute ago, not 1 minutes ago	2026-09-24 02:00:35 +02:00
Felitendo	1f0fb22d1c	docs: show the menu as real screenshots	2026-09-24 02:00:35 +02:00
Felitendo	b4038baf5b	docs: add a changelog and the release notes flow	2026-09-24 02:00:35 +02:00
Felitendo	d2b04f66ea	docs: add commit rules to claude.md	2026-09-24 01:13:07 +02:00
Felitendo	f1b7658e82	docs: coffee button and bug report link	2026-09-24 01:13:07 +02:00
Felitendo	6dd674c05f	chore: switch funding to buy me a coffee	2026-09-24 01:13:07 +02:00
Felitendo	b1e1cf0b54	docs: add icon and centered readme header	2026-09-21 14:58:44 +02:00
Felitendo	c40dfe0238	docs: add claude.md and avoid dashes	2026-09-21 14:00:02 +02:00
Felitendo	dbdbfe5cd5	chore: move to LoonixTools	2026-09-21 13:07:21 +02:00
Felitendo	368c741d99	docs: trim the readme to the essentials	2026-09-04 12:55:25 +02:00